I read three different essays, and this was my favorite:
1. This essay has a clear and succinct focus. It is neither too broad nor too narrow. It is also an interesting topic and one worthy of discussion.
2. The transtitions throughout the essay are there, but I believe the quote length may be an issue, for it does take up alot of space, considering the essay in itself is not really that long
3. The same idea is maintained through the entire essay. It does not drift off topic but truly attempts to analyze Austen's perception of Mrs. Bennet with greater depth.
4. The topic sentences are purposeful and one can read the topic sentence and know what the rest of the paragraph will be about
5. In terms of actual grammar, I see no egregious errors, every sentence seems to flow well
6. Once again, the main issue I do have with this well written essay is the quote use. The quotes in themselves are usually about as long as the author's analysis in this essay. Additionally, I believe this essay could have been enhanced if it had been a little bit longer and expanded on some of the final ideas, like Mrs. Bennet's relations with Lady Catherine and Miss Bingley.
But otherwise, a well thoughtout essay with an attracting title and topic.
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